Exercise- Making Paragraphs Concise

1.                                Math is the most important subject in the school, but we can deny that we also need the basic of  math for our daily life. Such as finances, so we would be able to avoid some financial loss. We even need math in our kitchen to avoid terrible tasting for our cook.

2.                                Once the electric street car was very popular in the USA after 1880 and the next 20-30. Because it was not populating very efficient able carrying large number of passenger with less cost, it even profitable for the company.  But in the next century some business start get rid of it in the street and replace with buses and cars.